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PostSubject: Drawing Post #2   Sun Aug 31, 2008 11:45 pm

I drew this in March this year.


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Post comments on its form please.

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There drew he forth the brand Excalibur,
And o’er him, drawing it, the winter moon,
Brightening the skirts of a long cloud, ran forth
And sparkled keen with frost against the hilt:
For all the haft twinkled with diamond sparks,
Myriads of topaz-lights, and jacinth-work
Of subtlest jewellery.
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PostSubject: Re: Drawing Post #2   Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:10 pm

i'll dispense with words such as "form" and give more of a lay man's critique on the work itself.
it still has that characteristic ability to seem disconcertingly bland - even though the back ground itself is one which is amazingly detailed and makes it a very expressive work
except for the "relationality" between the figure and all else.
whilst the subtle undertones of the shading make it more expressive (the face) - it still retains an overly simplified impression - which would've been perfectly fine, except the back ground is contrived enough to create different parallels between the painting itself.
one ornate, the other bland.
But otherwise, certain singular features of the work such as the work done on the eyes and the shadow work on the pillows (which should've been complemented more by the dynamics of the head) are all very well done.
All things considered- its a very good piece. Good show.
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PostSubject: Re: Drawing Post #2   Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:39 pm

i think you should work to make facial expressions a tad bit more realistic.
other than that.good show.back round truly is awesome.
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